Solid story, drawing and coloring. Professional job on all your parts.
Regarding the coloring -- it might have been interesting to experiment with a tinted palette or something a lot darker to go for all-out noir. Not sure if your artist though had a specific thing in mind.
That was one freaky-ass goooooooood comic!!! You could really make a lot of money making comics. I looked over your other ones real quick cuz I have to go to school in a bit, but I'll tell ya... you got some very excellent stuff.
I liked the ending. ^-^ Really weird, but nice, as in amazing. Like... she was predicting her own death... only the body was there... or she was a ghost trying to be avenged... but her doing it herself or something...